love the mind control, technological touches & busty milfs, even more that it's family.
the cinematic pov is amazing. pulls the viewer in for a better immersion.
my only qualm is the various typographical errors. if the author wishes, i can help.
i wish Breadman includes an option to have Ashley as Jon's girlfriend. she doesn't have big ones like others but she sure is cute & her proportions are so good! she genuinely cares for him & is willing to do everything to help him, i just wish the both of them end up together as couples & not just simply addicted to his seed. i just wanna have some love. (i'm lonely & desperate for this) please Breadman